Wednesday, 25 September 2013

Proofreading writing practice


Today         last             America's Cup         . We                        win     today 
today is the laste day of america's cup racing we all hope that we won it tody and bring the cup back
     NZ         .                                                                                    even                                NZ! It 
to NZealand We have been watching the races and some of us have evn made signs saying go NZ? it
              exciting                              frustrating 
has been exciteing to watch but also frustrat sometimes.

Tuesday, 24 September 2013

Proof reading writing warmup

The interschool cross country was on Friday. there were four people that went on a bus to a park. It was great fun but
the intoschool x country was on friday Their were 4 people thet went on a bas to a bark? it was gret fun but
I got really puffed!
i get relly puffd.

Wednesday, 18 September 2013

Ugly witch lady




Madousa's hair looks like big winding worms wiggling like jelly. She looks evil because her eyes look like a devil. Madousa's favourite colour is white because she is wearing all white. Her hair is as brown as a bears coat. She might live in an igloo. Everything she touches turns into stone. Madousa is so powerful that she beat a lion in a fight without even a single scratch.

Tuesday, 3 September 2013

100WC-Suddenly I heard a crack

One day I was playing with my friend. Suddenly I heard a crack and it didn't sound very far away. Me and my friend were very terrified we didn't know what to do. We thought it was an earthquake so we dropped covered and held. Until nothing happened so we got up and walked back inside. Then we started to play on the computer. Suddenly we heard the crack again but we didn't care about it because nothing happened the first time so we just carried on playing until a real earthquake came. We were so scared that we were running around the room saying “what do we do what do we do” we started to go crazy.