Evidence of achieving my writing goals.

My writing goals are to use capital letters and full stops.

This picture shows that I am using full stops and capital letters in my writing.


To edit my own work to make
even more interesting.

This picture shows that I have made changes to make a more interesting sentence.


My last goal is to use a range of language features like alliteration, similies and personification.

This shows that I have used a similie to show that we zoomed in the car as fast as flash. I compared me to flash using the word 'as.' My goal is to use more alliteration and personfication in my writing now that I am using some similies.